Blog 15

 




One thing i liked that they mentioned is that they have 100 local and regional farm-fresh products including fruits, vegetables, herbs, plants, and flowers at competitive wholesale prices and quantities. So instead of going to eat unhealthy foods you can get healthy foods for low price which keeps you healthy. So there easy to locate which doesnt force you to go out your way, and to serve you foods that willl help you grow correctly. Instead going out to mcdonaldsand eating these greasy fat foods that will afecct your body, with fat and no nourishment you can pay cheaper to get healthy foods. I have experience from eating fast foods they leave pimples, and make you gain fat in many areas ,and are not healthy for the heart. Just as a movie i viewed in highschool supersize me which shows the affect fast foods can have on you. Wouldnt you want to eat healthy and pay the same price. They includr such great foods such as cucumbers, cabbage, brocoli, corn, egg plant, beans, potatoe, spinach and many other healthy foods. So instead of going to fast foods that destroy youy body keeping you unhealthy, i would go with these type of healthy foods.

Blog 17

As i reviewed all my blogs i have noticed i completed most but didnt complete all the blogs that i was assigned. Also as i reviewed my blogs i could see the building of my writing from blog 6 to blog 16. I use to create essays with out indenting incorrect pronunciation, no paragraphing , and not answering directly what the author was mentioning in his essay. Thanks  to Doctor X and the method of blogging she helped me become a better writer then i was in the past. We were told to do several tactic such as proofreading others work to see the mistakes, and also see great techniques other writers had so we could become better writers. The proof reading method allowed me to go back to my work and correct the errors in my writing, and include better tactics to enhance my writing. When i viewed my old blogs i would write about a topic and give irelavant information not pertaining to the story leaving readers confused. Now when i look at my writings now i state what the author is trying to explain, also giving at least two examples from experience or from noticing that cocucld help you let readers know what they are mentioning in the essay. What i should have done was reread all the past blogs i have written and correct them making alll my blogs up to date showing the improvement i had from earlier this year. As i looked back at my blog 6 if that was the actual catw i dont think i meet the requirments to pass the test. I recently jus took the catw thanks to the blog i think i use the correct methods to pass the test, and im about 85 percent sure i passed thanks to the lessons from Doctor X, and the blogs